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Burn Notice

"Burn Notice" fic: "CROSSOVER" Part Three

Posted on 2008.08.02 at 18:26

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Ashaherazade
ashaherazade at 2008-08-06 05:52 (UTC) (Link)

So far so good

Hi Jonathan!
Having seen Burn Notice a few times I like your take on the crossover. Of course I am the Sean Connery James Bond fan since I was old enough to be allowed to see James Bond films... And sorry Michael but I'm with Fiona on this one he's still worth ogling as an octogenarian. Of course he was so very worth it back in the day when he was a body builder... :dreamy sigh:
I do think your use of the various asides and the beginning monologue works well, although it might not make as much sense if I hadn't seen episodes of Burn Notice so I know about how the voice-over thing is used during the show.
Jonathan Andrew Sheen
leviathan0999 at 2008-08-06 09:16 (UTC) (Link)

Re: So far so good

Thanks so much! I'm thrilled you're digging it.

I'm really enjoying Michael's disgruntlement at all the attention and adulation Fi's aiming at Bond. Of course, that doesn't mean he's jealous! Perish the thought! What could we be thinking?

All evidence is that nobody's reading this who isn't a BN fan, so I think I'm fairly safe with Michael's asides on tradecraft.They are some of the most fun to write.
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